Okay, so I had to rewatch the thing a couple times, because i had no idea what was going on. What I got from this, is that two kids fell in love at the first sight and then did stuff and they got separated until July 6 2011
And what does that date has to do with? Does it have to do with some events from real life of the creator that we don't know about? And why should we care? This doesn't tell absolutely anything interesting and/or meaningful in terms of plot
There's a lot of stuff that doesn't make any sense to the viewer and it just feels like a mish-mash of sad things that should make us sad because it's sad, not because we should care about developed characters, which are absent here

Not to be mean or anything, but keep trying

And goddamit, i haven't seen a lot of eddsworld, but you can't deny this is tord, he even has his hoodie and haircut and everything!

Goddamn!! Never expected itchy brow to be featured in Picollage, let alone get any sort of a fan art. Great stuff, really stylish, love it